Analysis of When I felt free for real

Leigha hardee 1990 (Dyersburg)



I am who I am today because you helped me see.
That I am worthy and I have a lot of tea.I want you to know that I am forever grateful and  Blessed.
But you are the best and better than all the rest.

I need all of you people to know that he is my man and I love him so.
I just wanted to not feel the pain but better yet I got left in the rain
Baby let's make this work for us
But I know we can make them hush

I am for once in my life at peace and feel great at heart
And you have had me from the start.
So I will forever be your feet in the sand but please never let go of my hand.

I need you in my life I can't wait to be your wife
You complete my heart and I can't be shot at like a dart..


Scheme XAA XXXX BBX XB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101011111 11110011011111111110101001 111010101101 1111110111111101111 1110111011101111001 10111111 11111111 11110111101111 01111101 111010111001111011111 1110111111111 10111011111101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 699
Words 176
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

This poem is based on how I have felt my entire life.

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Written on August 19, 2023

Submitted by Jsummar10 on August 19, 2023

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