Analysis of Blues
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
Sorry, home crew.
i feel kind of misty eyed
A little sad and blue.
Like going somewhere dark
and loud to drown these disconcerting shadows
of a love i’ve all but lost my faith in
Where no matter what i try to say or do
i lose all but the cost in Truth…
Then fail, again
to even find a quiet place
To let the dying echoes,
fade into the wind
To have a few cold brews,
collect my thoughts
Listen to some Jimi Hendrix
“Machine Gun”
Steal a moment or two
to drift and dream awhile,
Before the last vision
i have tucked away
To weep and moan,
dream of returning to
know what its like being alone
With the time we once shared,
leaving my mind One last time…
before fading to nothing dust
As my tears explode
inside my fallen pride
Evaporate like clouds
on a sunny summer day
My hopes and fears,
mix and mingle with my tears
Like snowflakes
lost in a raging blizzard
During one cold
dark winters night, alone…
Chilling to the bone
Turn your heart to stone,
Soul killer, storm.
Saying one last prayer
that you will be all right
Me, needing your love
to keep me warm,
Listening to the angels sing
the haunting refrain
in the fading whispers
of the last time
i heard you say …
the words
“i love you”
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Scheme | A BA XC XA X XX CX XX XD AX DE F AF XG X XB XE XX XX XF F FH XX IH XX XG EX A I |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011 1111101 010101 11011 011110101 1011111110 11101111111 11110101 1101 11010101 1101010 10101 110111 0111 10111010 011 101011 110101 010110 11101 1101 110101 11111001 101111 1011111 01101101 11101 011101 01011 1010101 1101 1010111 11 1001010 1011 110101 10101 11111 1101 10111 111111 11011 1111 10010101 01001 001010 1011 1111 01 111 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,304 |
Words | 301 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 29 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 51 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 33 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 8 |
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