Analysis of If You fill My Heart With Clarity



If you fill my heart with clarity, so pure,
In your presence, every doubt will find its cure.
With a crystal-clear view of love's vast sea,
Together we'll navigate, wild and free.

No shadows of uncertainty shall remain,
In the clarity of love, we'll break the chain.
With every word, every touch, every shared grace,
Our love will shine, a guiding star in space.

Through the mists of life, we'll find our way,
In the clarity of love, come what may.
With hearts intertwined, our spirits will soar,
If you fill my heart with clarity, forevermore.

In the depths of understanding, we'll find our song,
In the clarity of love, where we both belong.
With each passing moment, our love will persist,
If you fill my heart with clarity, it's in you I'll enlist.

So let us cherish this gift, so rare,
In the clarity of love, we'll meet every dare.
With you by my side, life's challenges we'll face,
If you fill my heart with clarity, love's sweet embrace.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEXA FFGG HHDD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11111110011 011010011111 1010111111 010110101 1110100101 00100111101 11001100110011 10111010101 1011111101 0010011111 11001101011 1111111001 001101011101 001001111101 111010101101 111111100101101 111101111 0010011111001 11111110011 1111111001101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 949
Words 193
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 145
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on September 16, 2023

Submitted by ggolden9 on September 16, 2023

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