Analysis of The Pleiades



Shining seven sisters sharing starry skies
Your blue glowing cluster dances
Right before my eyes
Guiding ancient mariners across the Mediterranean Sea
Fascinating many who gaze up
At your amazing beauty.

Wonder has a way of illuminating living
The luminaries of The Pleiades
Shining keep on giving
Lighting up the darkness with subtle magnificence
Your lights fire within me
A powerful transcendence.

Elevating effervescence with elegance
Joy leaps inside me
With newfound relevance
Distance does nothing to dampen
Your stellar luminescence
In fact I embrace you
And your celestial benevolence.

Admiring your bright blue fires above
Echoes and ripples reach out
Inspiring a cosmic love
Someday I pray she’ll come
Be beautiful and so much more
The brightest of all the stars
My wish I’ve waited for.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Poetic Form
Metre 10101010101 11101010 10111 1010100010001001 10010111 1101010 101011010010 01001010 101110 1010101101 1110011 0100010 10011100 11011 111100 10110110 110010 011011 010100100 0101111001 1001011 0100101 11111 11000111 0101101 111101 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,082
Words 184
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 7, 7, 2
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 175
Words per stanza (avg) 34

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The wish I made looking up at The Pleiades

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Written on September 27, 2023

Submitted by charlesyork14 on September 27, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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