Analysis of Whispers of Eternity



In the quiet hours of the night, I ponder,
The fear of dying, a thought to squander.
It creeps upon me like a ghostly chill,
A haunting tremor, an echoing still.

What lies beyond this mortal coil's embrace?
The unknown path, the uncharted space,
Where dreams and memories in shadows fade,
And life's grand tapestry starts to degrade.

The heart within, it carries the weight,
Of the fleeting moments, the years of late.
Regrets and sorrows, joys and love,
All bundled in a fragile treasure trove.

I glimpse the stars, their distant, twinkling light,
And wonder if they hold secrets in the night.
Do they whisper tales of lives now past,
Or do they weep for dreams that didn't last?

Yet, in this fear, there's a poignant grace,
A call to savor life's tender embrace.
To cherish each moment, both near and far,
And let love be our guiding star.

For though the fear of dying may remain,
In our hearts, love's eternal flame.
It's in the tears shed and the laughter shared,
That we find solace in the knowledge we've cared.

So, as I face the shadows of eternity's door,
I'll gather life's fragments, its joys, and more.
And in the whispers of eternity, I'll find,
That love and memories forever bind.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEXX FFGG CCHH XXII JJKK
Poetic Form Quatrain  (71%)
Metre 001010101110 0111001110 1101110101 0101011001 1101110101 001100101 110100011 0111001101 010111001 1010100111 01010101 1100010101 11011101001 01011110001 111011111 1111111101 101110101 0111011001 1101101101 011110101 1101110101 010110101 1001100101 11110001011 111101111 1101101101 000101010011 1101000101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,200
Words 246
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

This poem, "Whispers of Eternity," delves into the deep fear of mortality that we all share. Through vivid imagery, it explores the uncertainties of what awaits us beyond life. Yet, it also reminds us to cherish the fleeting beauty of existence and find solace in love and memories. This brief, reflective piece invites readers to contemplate life's mysteries and the enduring power of love.

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Written on September 23, 2023

Submitted by AKINYEKE_MICHEAL on September 23, 2023

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Akinyeke Micheal

I am the whisperer of emotions, the weaver of dreams, and the sculptor of words. With a pen as my wand, I conjure verses that dance between the realms of the heart and the imagination. My poetry is an intimate reflection of the human experience, exploring the depths of love, loss, hope, and the intricacies of the soul. Inspired by life's fleeting moments and the beauty hidden in the mundane, I seek to capture the essence of existence through the power of language. Each poem I craft is a journey, an exploration, and an invitation to explore the uncharted landscapes of the heart. As a poet, I believe in the transformative magic of words, in their ability to heal wounds, ignite passions, and connect souls across time and space. Through my verses, I aim to touch hearts, stir emotions, and leave an indelible mark on the tapestry of human expression. Join me on this lyrical voyage, and together, we will navigate the boundless sea of emotions and discover the power of poetry to illuminate the human spirit. more…

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