Analysis of Bared My Soul



In a world of endless whispers, I found solace in our bond,
Opened up my heart and soul, the stories I had never told.

With trembling words, I bared my truths, a vulnerable display,
And as I spoke, unseen, I felt your heart's beats.

Your presence was a symphony, your ears a gentle shore,
Each secret I unveiled, your caring powers, all I could snuggle.

You listened with such tenderness, my fears you understood,
And in that fleeting moment, my worries were no longer a burden to my soul.

But now, oh where have you gone? A ghost within the crowd,
Leaving me in solitude, an abyss, black as midnight, with no sheltering cloud.

Did my honesty scare you off, a burden you couldn't bear?
Or was it simply fate's cruel joke, a twist in love's affair?

I search the depths of memory, tracing back our shared time,
Our laughter and our tears, now lost in moments' climb.

I long for your warmth again, that once familiar voice
But all that remains is silence, an echo I miss so much more.

Yet, through this heartache's haze, I vow to carry on,
To find the strength within myself and rise like the dawn.

For though you've vanished from my world, your impact still resides,
In the tales I've woven with you, where love and trust collide.

So farewell, my missing piece, I'll cherish what we splendidly shared,
And in my prose and poetry, our memories will be expressively bared.

For I told you how I felt, and you listened with such gentle grace,
But now, you're gone, nowhere to be found…again…you've left an unbearable trace.


Scheme XX XX AX XX BB CC DD XA XX XX EE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 0011101011100101 101110101011101 1100111110100001 01110111111 11010100110101 1101011101011110 1101110011101 00110101100110010111 1111111010101 101010101111111001 111001110101101 111101101010101 110111001011011 10100101110101 1111101110101 1110111011011111 11111111101 110101101101 11110111101101 00111011110101 111101110111001 00110100101001111 1111111011011101 111111110111101001
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,552
Words 308
Sentences 14
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

Everything falls apart just when you believe everything is going smoothly.

Font size:
 

Written on September 03, 2023

Submitted by Wildflower888 on October 09, 2023

Modified by Wildflower888 on October 16, 2023

1:35 min read
35

Discuss this Charmane Joy Belleza poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Bared My Soul" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 11 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/171056/bared-my-soul>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    19
    days
    13
    hours
    21
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The repetition of vowel sounds is an example of _______.
    A assonance
    B rhythm
    C repetition
    D rhyme