Analysis of A perfect man in our eyes

Cynthia novotny 1984 (Wilmington de)



When I think of your arm around mine
I feel so safe with your arms holding mine
That I never want this moment to stop
Can this moment just last forever with us?

I enjoy being cuddled up in your arms
you make me feel so safe and secure
that I’m just so comfortable around  you
That my heart feels at peace with  you

You have opened a part of me up inside
That I can longer hide in my shell no more
You taught me that you can fall in love
I never want to stop feeling this way

I know my love that you aren’t perfect
but I could never ask you to change
always continue to be who you are
I fell in love with you not your body


Scheme AAXX XXBB XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111011 1111111101 1110111011 11101101011 10110101011 111111001 11111000011 11111111 11100111101 11110101111 111111101 1101111011 1111111001 111101111 101011111 1101111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 639
Words 146
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

Dedicated to some one that loves a man for them and accepts them for them. For a human isn’t perfect one bit.

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Written on October 27, 2023

Submitted by cynthianovotny6 on October 27, 2023

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Cynthia novotny

hi yes my name is Cynthia Novotny. I write all kinds of poems. Its a way to get out how I feel. There are all different kinds of poems. This is the first one I have written in a while. more…

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