Analysis of My sun rises on the feather in my hand
Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)
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I'm magic
See the peaks I climb up
Rise above the creaks
When I'm on shaky ground
And rock crumbs sink my defeat
Or the TV screams
My only self defence
Shakes myself
The early bird
Deserves the empty lament?
Hit again by negative vibes
I ride the waves
Of our rays of sunlit sighs
Removeable pain in pure light
Greets neon spoke
The mark of regret
Needs this spark dinner jokes
But there's a whole world of
noahs ark and winner winner
This chickens now heated up
Good job
Maybe ill always be
a fresh beginner
Smile you won
I'm on the wrong side?
Now I'm the true sinner
That may not take the win
But what goes up
Might not come back down
So even regret doesn't
Make the dinner
Shine on little sun
Try again
Everyone
And/or one day
forgive yourself, it's already done
Fogotten in heaven and hell
Before you even decided to tell
To move on aswell
Or drown in this empty well
Of mass 'resurrection'
and glass turned
feathered turtle shells.
Scheme | ABCADEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSCTUSVWSXCYZSV1 V2 V3 3 3 3 V4 5 |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11 110 101111 10101 111101 0111101 10111 110101 11 0101 0101001 10111001 1101 1101111 11011 1101 01101 111101 110111 1101010 1101101 11 10111 01010 111 11011 110110 111101 1111 11111 1100110 1010 11101 101 10 0111 010110101 101001 011101011 1111 1101101 11010 011 10101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 957 |
Words | 188 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 44 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 756 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 179 |
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