Analysis of Belly Full



Mommy, I want to come over
To listen
To learn
To get some home-cooked advice
Fresh off the skillet
And get full off your wisdom
Mommy, I’m hungry for your advice
And good tips
Just a sip of it would do
My soul good, like chicken noodle soup
When I was younger,
I would deny you the time to tell
The truth, but now that I’m older,
Without a chip on my shoulder,
Im ready to taste some of that pudding
With proof in it
Mommy, did you cook?


Scheme ABCDEFDGHIAJAAKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 10111110 110 11 1111101 11010 0111110 101101101 011 1011111 111110101 11110 110110111 01111110 01011110 1101111110 1101 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 445
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 337
Words per stanza (avg) 89

About this poem

This poem is about my immigrant mother, who is my best friend and advisor. She is a retired teacher, an evangelist, a prayer warrior, and an alchemist. One day I’ll be devastated by her loss, but I will cherish her while she is here

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Written on October 27, 2021

Submitted by aadetomi on October 27, 2023

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