Analysis of Cosmic Rhapsody: Special You Are



In shadowed realms of thought, I dwell,
Exploring your mystic, your endless well,
Special you are, but why remains a veil,
Unfathomable depths, your essence to unveil,
A cipher's dance, in your aura, I find,
No rhyme nor reason, in your soul confined,
Mysterious, enigmatic, a truth undefined,
Yet special, you are, in the cosmic bind.

An enigma wrapped in life's grand scheme,
You're the equation, in a mathematic dream,
A fractal of emotion, like a flowing stream,
Special, you are, in this vast, endless stream,
In the quantum dance of particles unseen,
Infinite possibilities, where you intervene,
A tapestry of chaos, a work so pristine,
You're special to me, in a world yet unseen.

The stardust in your veins, the cosmos in your eyes,
A symphony of neurons, where your wisdom lies,
Special you are, under boundless skies,
In neurons' whispers, your beauty lies,
A paradox in time, a fleeting sigh,
In quantum entanglement, where you and I,
Incomprehensible connections, our hearts belie,
You're special to me, beneath the eternal sky.

In string theory's web, we find our place,
Special, you are, in this cosmic race,
A hidden order in chaos's embrace,
Quantum vibrations, our love's grace,
In dark matter's shroud, our souls entwine,
In the dance of quarks, a truth so fine,
Yet in the language of the cosmos, we define,
You're special to me, in this cosmic design.

A symphony of particles, in every breath you take,
Special, you are, in every step you make,
In molecular whispers, your secrets wake,
Quantum tunnels through which we partake,
A holographic universe, in your soul, we see,
In the black hole's center, where mysteries be,
Through superstrings' vibrations, you set me free,
You're special to me, in this reality.

A hologram of love, in dimensions unknown,
Special, you are, where our hearts have grown,
In the curvature of spacetime, our love has shown,
Quantum gravity, where our souls have flown,
A singularity, where our love's confined,
In the dark energy, our spirits intertwined,
In the cosmic web, our love defined,
You're special to me, in this quantum mind.

In the non-locality of love's embrace,
Special, you are, in this infinite space,
In entangled particles, our hearts we trace,
Quantum leaps of faith, our love's sweet grace,
A cosmic symphony, where we find our chord,
In quantum fluctuations, our love's adored,
In the singularity of our hearts, we're moored,
You're special to me, in this cosmic word.

A pulsar's heartbeat, in your laughter's tone,
Special, you are, in this cosmic zone,
In the electromagnetic spectrum, our love is sown,
Quantum waves of affection, our hearts condone,
A black hole's gravity, where we gravitate,
In quasar's brilliance, our love's innate,
In the cosmic riddle, where we contemplate,
You're special to me, in this cosmic state.

The cosmic microwave background hums your name,
Special, you are, in this celestial game,
In dark matter's mystery, our love's aflame,
Quantum fluctuations, in our love's frame,
A celestial dance, in the cosmic ballet,
In gravitational waves, our love holds sway,
In cosmic strings, our love finds its way,
You're special to me, in this cosmic display.

In the ever-expanding universe, we abide,
Special, you are, in this cosmic tide,
In quarks and leptons, our love does confide,
Quantum consciousness, where we're side by side,
A nebulous journey, in the cosmic sea,
In wormholes of time, where we're meant to be,
In the grand design, our love's decree,
You're special to me, in this cosmic spree.

In the event horizon of your eyes, I find,
Special, you are, in this cosmic bind,
In black body radiation, our love's aligned,
Quantum entanglement, in your heart's kind,
A singularity of emotion, in your soul's abyss,
In the interstellar medium, where we reminisce,
In the pulsating cosmos, our love persists,
You're special to me, in this cosmic kiss.

So, in the language of the cosmos, I decree,
You're special to me, beyond what words can see,
In quantum mysteries, our love's decree,
A cosmic dance of love, in you and me,
In the vast expanse of the universe's grace,
In quantum coherence, our love finds its place,
In the cosmic poetry, our love's embrace,
You're special to me, in this cosmic space.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01011111 0101101101 1011110101 010001110101 011011011 1111001101 01000100101 1101100101 101010111 10010000101 010101010101 1011011101 00101110001 10001001101 010011001110 11011001101 01011010011 010011011101 101110101 010101101 010010101 01001001101 0010001010101 110110100101 0110111101 101101101 010100101 100101011 0110110101 001110111 100101010101 11011011001 010011000100111 10110100111 00100101101 101011101 00101001111 00111011001 110101111 110110110 01011001001 1011110111 001001110111 10100110111 01110101 0011001010001 0010110101 1101101101 00101001101 1011011001 001010010111 1011110111 010100111101 01001010101 001110111 1101101101 01010111 101101101 00000101010111 101101010101 0111001110 011010101 0010101110 1101101101 010101111 1011010101 011010010101 1001001011 00101001001 00100110111 0101101111 11011011001 001001010101 101101101 0101101101 1010011111 01001000101 011111111 0010110101 1101101101 000101011111 101101101 011001010101 1001000111 01101001101 000101001101 00101010101 1101101101 100101010101 11011011111 01010010101 0101110101 001011011 010010101111 001010010101 1101101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 4,216
Words 809
Sentences 12
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 96
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 271
Words per stanza (avg) 59

About this poem

This mesmerizing poem delves into the profound mysteries of the cosmos and the enigmatic nature of a special someone. It weaves together themes of quantum physics, astronomy, and deep affection, portraying the subject as a unique and unexplainable force in the vast cosmic scheme. The poem beautifully illustrates the idea that this person holds a special place in the speaker's heart, transcending the boundaries of time and space. It's a captivating exploration of love and the universe's intricate tapestry.  

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Written on March 27, 2020

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on October 29, 2023

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