Analysis of Bright Moments Ahead

Oscar Auliq-Ice 1994 (Port Elizabeth)



Sometimes we feel so insignificant,
Thinking our impacts fade away.
Yet every ripple starts a movement,
With the choices we make every day.

Grand gestures, they're not the only path,
When a hand's out, we'll guide them through.
For every thirst, there's a laughter shared,
Because in kindness, our strength renews.

Perhaps our deeds don't move mountains high,
But we've got the power to light the gray.
With every act, we ignite the sky,
In these bright moments, we pave the way.

When shadows cast, we're the glowing beam,
The melody in a hopeful song.
Through every path, we're the golden dream,
With love as our guide, we can't go wrong.

Grand tales aren't just for the legends bold,
But every spark has its tale to say.
With every smile, stories of love retold,
In these bright moments, we lead the way.

Moments fleeting, can leave lasting marks,
One simple act can turn night to day.
Embracing love, kindling little sparks,
In these bright moments, we'll find our way.

Shining moments, shining bright
Sparkling tales of love and light


Scheme ABAB XXXX CBCB DEDE XBAB FBFB GG
Poetic Form
Metre 011110100 101001101 1100101010 1010111001 110110101 10111111 1100110101 0101010101 0110111101 1110101101 1100110101 011101101 11110101 010000101 1100110101 1111011111 1110110101 1100111111 1100110111 011101101 101011101 110111111 010110101 0111011101 1010101 1011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,044
Words 209
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on October 21, 2023

Submitted by Auliq-Ice on October 31, 2023

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