Analysis of EROTIC POEM: IN THE WINDOW
Tonight I left the window open
so that my thoughts would fly,
and I drew suns in the night sky
so that they light your steps when you arrive.
And I wove tremors in your body and in your veins,
I stripped you of times where you could break,
I drank lightly the poison of your parallel legs
and in the sea of your face I was captain.
I murmured ardor and vigils, I was a sentinel,
In the wounded hour my name was a talisman,
poor prey of your hungry mouth,
sincere sample of this dark guardian.
I painted your lips with colors, your beehives,
your corners scented with white orange blossom,
I built promises with storm splinters
and by your body, like the wind, I let myself be carried away.
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Scheme | A B B X C X X A X A X A C X C X X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011101010 111111 01110011 1111111101 0111001100011 111111111 111001011101 00011111110 11010010110100 0010101110100 1111101 0110111100 1101111011 11010111010 11100111 0111010111111001 1001 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 798 |
Words | 171 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 17 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 33 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 8 |
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