Analysis of Mental Problems



The words "Deployed to Israel" coarse my ears,
My head in a void, I can not figure out a way to process this,
I forget the address, I must ask,
I bask in the thoughts, "What happens if they are killed?"
I try to connect some dots, to no avail
Surely they will only be in minor scale, right?
Purely terrified, I walk to work, not thinking straight
I zone out, my mind blown

Am I alone?


Scheme XXXXXXXA A
Poetic Form
Metre 01011100111 1100111110101111 10101111 110011101111 11101111101 101110101011 101011111101 111111 1101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 386
Words 84
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 145
Words per stanza (avg) 39

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Written on November 01, 2023

Submitted by peteypickles2 on November 01, 2023

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