Analysis of Can't See Me

Frank Layden 1960 (Newfoundland)



Stashed deeply inside so that others can't see
Are long ago secrets that define the real me
Molding fabrication into a state of perfection assures my acceptance and denies rejection

Mastering deception requires more than cost
While forging authentic the authentic is lost
With false-self using ego the real is reversed
Genuine mirrors illusion it is so well rehearsed

A false-self well created is what they all see
Portrayal so realistic they think it is me
Camouflaged in mystery not unlike a ghost
My true self identity is what suffers the most


Scheme AAX XXBB AACC
Poetic Form
Metre 11001111011 110110101011 1001001011010011010001010 100010010111 110010001011 111101001101 10010010111101 011101011111 010101011111 10010010101 1110100111001
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 548
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

A poem about masking one's identity.

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Written on May 01, 2023

Submitted by frankpainter4321 on October 26, 2023

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