Analysis of Just one more try



Pain pain leaving me a broken heart
my strings detached, to my pumping valve
No bike no car, I walked for miles
Trying to find my Why, who when and where
Friends who left me bare
Girls who left with no care
I still ask why
When I'm lost inside, and wanna die
I'll give it "just one more try"


Scheme ABCDDDEEE
Poetic Form Nonet (56%)
Metre 111010101 110111101 11111111 1011111101 11111 111111 1111 111010101 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 294
Words 63
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 224
Words per stanza (avg) 60

About this poem

It's about not giving up, that this isn't the only time you'll feel pain, they'll be more, when you feel like giving up, make it, Just one more try.

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Written on October 30, 2023

Submitted by differentclothclothing2018 on October 30, 2023

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Rah thee designa

Name Rashed age 38 born in Manhattan raised in Queens, Ny been great at writing. Discovered he had a talent in H.s Martin van Buren H.s when he entered a poetry contest and won 1st place out of principal list students and dean's list students. He continues on the passion hoping to one day get paid to go on a poetey tour and perform. more…

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