Analysis of Whisper in the wind



Whisper In The Wind

Like a rain fall falling down
She only dries up in time
Like ice on fire if close enough
She’ll burn your eyes
Just cause I’m not physically there
Doesn’t mean I’m truly gone
I’ve just become a whisper in
the wind

Time to time bring flowers
To that cross where I lay under
Ground
I wish I could do it all over again
Listen to me I’m a whisper in the wind
Sometimes a spark never becomes a flame
Remember a true love can last a lifetime

We’ve removed bricks from life’s solid wall
Not once did she ever fall
Something innocent as a child waving goodbye
Please live life to the fullest I’ll still be by your side
Somethings truly never die footprints left in sand
I’d give up anything just to hold your hand
For now I’m a whisper in the wind

I know it wasn’t easy you’ll never find
Love like this again falling star slipping from your hand
When winter approaches you become cold
I’m no longer there to hold you
Remember spring is around the corner
Plant your flowers once more grab a memory
From the sky take time to laugh
Everything that begins must find it’s end
Listen to me I’ve become a whisper in the wind

Rene Clements
Oct 6 2023


Scheme A XBXXXXXA XCXXAXB DDXXEEA AEXXCXXXA XX
Poetic Form
Metre 10001 1011101 1101101 111101101 1111 111110001 111101 11010100 01 111110 11111110 1 11111111001 10111010001 0101100101 0100111101 101111101 1111101 10100101101 1111010111111 1101011101 1111011111 111010001 1111101101 1110110110111 1100101011 11101111 0101101010 11101110100 1011111 101011111 1011101010001 0110 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,215
Words 252
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 7, 7, 9, 2
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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Losing a loved one

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Written on October 06, 2023

Submitted by Janetp-c on October 27, 2023

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