Analysis of Children of War



After the plume settles

I seek, scavenging
Rubble, debris
Without my lens
I’ve no clarity

I weep
Vultures squall
‘Neath this ruin
Awaits a feast

I… can’t… see


Scheme X XAXA XXXX A
Poetic Form Tetractys  (60%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 100110 11100 1001 0111 11100 11 101 1110 0101 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 177
Words 37
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 7

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Child buried before their parent

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Written on November 08, 2023

Submitted by on November 10, 2023

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