Analysis of A special birthday wish



A Special Birthday wish

It takes one Birthday wish to put a smile on one mothers face
A Birthday wish from one special someone that's already been called to our Heavens place
A soul that was taken from ones family way to soon
One special someone that'll wish a Birthday wish from as far as our moon
It'll complete all the birthday wishes she'll receive that special day
So here's his special birthday wish he'll have me say
Happy Birthday Mom he'll say with a smile from ear to ear
Knowing a birthday wish like this may bring a fallen tear
If he could he would for sure wipe that tear from his mother's eye
Probably tell her there is no reason for her to cry
Being the youngest and the first to go
He would be the first to let her know
Happy Birthday Mom from me to you
Knowing that one Birthday wish wasn't going to come true
A Birthday wish so precious that only a mother could understand
With a Birthday wish given from that special someone that has already arrived in our Heavens promise land


Scheme X AABBCCXXDDEEFFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 01011 11111110111101 01111101101011110101 01111011100111 11011010111111101 1001101101011101 11110111111 1011111011111 1001111110101 111111111111101 10010111101011 1001000111 111011101 10111111 1011111010111 011110110010101 10111011101110100101010101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,001
Words 194
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 16
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 400
Words per stanza (avg) 95

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A son taken to soon

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Written on September 21, 2022

Submitted by mcgowenjoe77 on November 20, 2023

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