Analysis of Black Blood

Ella Rochman 2004 (Johannesburg)



Long ago
something
died.

This dead is dragged within me
Poison infects my body
as this carcass rots.

Bruised eyebags,
clumps of hair in my hands,
a gaping ribcage,
are signs of sepsis.

Perhaps my blood has turned a cool shade of black too.

Lethal.
the dead wrap their hands around my neck -
I let them choke me.


Scheme XXX AAB BXXX X XXA
Poetic Form
Metre 101 10 1 1111011 1001110 11101 11 111011 0101 11110 011111011111 10 011110111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 321
Words 74
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 1, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

This poem is an exploration of my experience with grief and describes the way it consumed me physically and mentally. In this poem I do not grieve a person in particular but rather a life that I could have lived.

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Written on May 24, 2022

Submitted by Ellarochman on November 29, 2023

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Ella Rochman

I grew up in the Suburbia of Johannesburg. I enjoy all forms of artistic expression such as dance, painting and of course writing.Someday I hope to get my own work published. more…

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