Analysis of Shades of Faded Grey



Brushed upon a canvas
with only colors, black and white
spark images of consequences
of actions taken, or not.
Would left or right turn on a path
have changed a goal still left unmet?
Would joys become collected tears?
Or pain of wound not ever felt?
Some days I see
the pitch of moonless night.
Some days, the gleam of white.
Sometimes I reach for unused brush
cautiously dipping it
into the contrast palette.
I splatter touch of black
with bits of white.
Reflecting that perhaps
a step I took or one I missed
is just a shade of faded grey.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIBBJKLMBNOP
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 11010101 11001100 1101011 11111101 11011101 11010101 11111101 1111 01111 110111 01111011 100101 0101010 110111 1111 010101 01111111 11011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 555
Words 114
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 429
Words per stanza (avg) 101

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Because sometimes I think too much.

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Submitted by Giselavigil on December 26, 2023

Modified by Giselavigil on December 28, 2023

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Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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