Analysis of Me, Bri



PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Squishing flesh between walls of cloth

Why does it seem that I
That me
That someone of my being is as grotesque as one can possibly portray?

That I
That me
That a girl aged 16 wants so desperately to tear from her skin

That I
That me
That all two hundred and seventy lbs can carry its burdensome weight

That I
That me
That I'm still living as Bri.


Scheme x x aBc ABx ABx ABc
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1101111 111111 11 111110110111110001 11 11 101111100011101 11 11 111100100111011001 11 11 1111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 388
Words 82
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

It doesn't rhyme excessively as my other ones do, the excessive rhyming meant to represent my need for control at all times. This is purely a thing I wrote after I had an epiphany. Enjoy

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Written on January 03, 2024

Submitted by abrianna_j on January 03, 2024

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