Analysis of Broken Clown

Gary Major 1967 (United Kingdom)



A Broken Clown
With a smile a frown
A face that fits
Smile upside down

A painted face  
A big red smile
No sorrow here
Just glee and cheer
No Despair
Just laughs no fear

This is the Image
Though its Untrue
The one I chose
To show for you

Look again
See though my feint
No smile just paint
Tears of Sadness
Lines from Laughter
No just frowns

Beneath the Gown
The Heart of a Clown
A steady rhythm
Torn with Grief

Broken promises
Friendship Betrayed
Loved Ones Lost
Nerves so Frayed

Sunrise I awake
I reach for the  paint
Just smile and Laughter
A face full of Cheer
No sorrow no fear

This is the image
Though Its Untrue
I show to my self
To get me through

One day the Sun
Will not me wake
The smile gone forever
No laughter no Frown
No Joy no Clown


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Poetic Form
Metre 0101 10101 0111 1111 0101 0111 1101 1101 101 1111 11010 1101 0111 1111 101 1111 1111 1110 1110 111 0101 01101 01010 111 10100 1001 111 111 1101 11101 11010 01111 11011 11010 1101 11111 1111 1101 1111 011010 11011 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 758
Words 161
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 6, 4, 4, 5, 4, 5
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

Coming to the end of a long Career and working out where life takes me next

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Written on December 25, 2023

Submitted by Gary1967 on December 25, 2023

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