Analysis of Desaparecido de mi vista

Inez Amarillas 2022 (Culiacan)



Porque se fueron casi al mismo tiempo.
La vida es muy frágil.
Porque los dos? Me siento como un tempo.
Ya nada es fácil.

Los amare siempre
Mi alma está vacía y oscura sin ustedes.
Llegarán hasta mi quiebre.
Dios ayúdame a salir de estas redes.

Maldita muerte.
Porque me quitaste a los dos.
Jamas te daré mi suerte.
Eres mala, traicionera solo llegas y te los llevas a todos.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EDED
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111111 1101111 111111011 110111 111 11001101111 111011 101101111 11 111011 11111 110111111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 384
Words 83
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Fallecieron mis amores.

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Written on January 10, 2024

Submitted by inez.amarillas on January 10, 2024

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