Analysis of Blue eyed boy



My sweet blue eyed boy,  your eyes so blue.
When I first looked into them my heart so passionately like a dove flew and flew and flew and flew.  Flew through the night.
Flew into your sweet arms and there was no more pain all was then right.  We danced and we sang and oh boy did we sing.  You were my desire yet I never got the ring.  My once sweet blue eyed boy what has happened what hawk took your joy,  took out the light from your once sweet blue eyes?  Why did you go away?  Why did you stray my love why did you not stay?  I have lived I have loved many yet when I sleep it’s always you there.
My sweet blue eyed boy,  my love my hearts desire.  Still in my olden age I still dream of you and in your eyes remains your once young hearts fire.  Now here as I breath my last breaths at  age of 97 I still have the same fire,  you my love my only true hearts desire.  As I breath my last breath the memories play before my tired mind.  Memories of my once sweet blue eyed boy,  and this my love is why I was able to for you write one last rhyme for you.  This love was real it was life it was deep it was true.  


Scheme ABCA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 1111011111100010110101011101 10111101111111111101101111110101011101011111111110111111101111111111101111111111111111111011111111 111111111010101101111110011011111101111111111111101101111101101011111101001011101100111111101111111101111111111111111111111
Characters 1,119
Words 235
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 211
Words per line (avg) 63
Letters per stanza (avg) 844
Words per stanza (avg) 250

About this poem

Merely a love story about a girl and a boy and love and pain and misery but also most importantly passion so strong it gave them both a will a fight to live to breath! A love that you dream of a love that even tho it was pain it was also life and a will to all the sudden wake up and to breath and to live!

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Written on January 21, 2000

Submitted by Dorbrad1 on January 17, 2024

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Dorothy menza

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