Analysis of Above the cloud
Above the cloud
By: Dr. Mohamed Labib Salem
Above the cloud
It took layers of days
To weave my dream way
To make my door key
To find my pathway
But, it escaped with no say
I tied my cold rays
I tight my night and days
Above the cloud to stay
Above the cloud
I found my dream way
Playing with sunrays
Laughing loud on air
I asked to join my day
But dreams don’t care
It just sprays the way
Above the cloud
I stay for my dream way
Until it decides to stay
Thanks
Mohamed Labib Salem
Tanta, Egypt
| Scheme | Ab Acdxddccd AdcededAdd xbx |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 0101 11010110 0101 111011 11111 11111 1111 1101111 11111 111101 010111 0101 11111 1011 10111 111111 1111 11101 0101 111111 011111 1 010110 110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 503 |
| Words | 109 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 2, 9, 10, 3 |
| Lines Amount | 24 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 97 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
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