Analysis of Empty



The feeling of being alone is the worst.
Who do I go to when I possibly can’t keep going?
Where do I run when I feel my heart about to burst?
How to I keep my Loneliness from showing?

My sadness has became apart of my being.
I am no longer the happy girl I wanted to be.
But there is no shaking this feeling.
I am slowly slipping away, can’t you see?

The cuts are cutting deeper.
The bones are more visible.
All I’m doing is growing weaker and weaker.
I no longer feel invincible.

Everyday is the same.
I want someone to light the flame.


Scheme ABAB BCBC DEDE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 01011001101 11111111001110 1111111110111 11111100110 110101011110 11110010111011 111110110 11101001111 0111010 0111100 111011010010 111010100 101101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 559
Words 123
Sentences 15
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem is about a girl who is fighting for her life to survive the pain of being lonely

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Written on January 28, 2024

Submitted by Mgraytwins6 on January 28, 2024

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Brooklynn Gray

I am from Fort Wayne Indiana. I am 16. I play tons of sports. I found poetry because it makes me help express what I can’t tell people more…

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