Analysis of A world filled with stones

Lisakhanya Noku 2007 (George)



Welcome to a world full of stones
Where one can run away from destiny but never their fate
Cause like it's all been said and done
Fate is fate and destiny is destiny
Fate is aligned with what we can never dare to change not even a wise man
Who discovered maths can change it
We live in a brutal society where you have to
have a clear destiny and one mistake means
you are as good as dead in the eyes of society
"Long lives my poor soul against these vultures trying to rip me apart"
Society is destined to see the bad in you rather than the good
Nobody wants to see the other succeed
Success is what lives rent free in our minds rather than actioned
We are all successful in our minds but only 10% can make it through the hardships that comes with the Word Success
Yet again "long lives my poor soul that is inclined to succeed"


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Poetic Form
Metre 10101111 111101110011011 11111101 11101001100 1101111110111110011 10101111 11001001001111 10110001011 11111100110100 11111011101011101 010011011010110101 111101001 011111101011011 111010010111011110101110101 101111111101101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 832
Words 167
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 660
Words per stanza (avg) 163

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Journey of life Fate vs destiny yet fate wins all the time Fate remains unchanged

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Written on February 12, 2024

Submitted by lisawotshinisi on February 12, 2024

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