Analysis of A TRUE story



In this darkness
I do not want
It is a great burden
On which to hold.

I try to hard to make it easier,
Oh no...
I am collapsing under weight and pressure,
My head's fastly spinning,
And heart's rapidly beating,
Are you still there for help?
Now that I'm needing!


Scheme XXXX AXABBXB
Poetic Form
Metre 0110 1111 110110 1111 1111111100 11 11010101010 11110 0110010 111111 11110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 263
Words 59
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 7
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

A late thirties woman so honest loving and caring. Breaks down, When she feels like no one is listening!!!

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Written on March 01, 2024

Submitted by on March 02, 2024

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Tamira Adams

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