Analysis of NOT TOO FAR FROM HORRIZON



I see you like I never did,
And closer to your words,
I hear most often afar,
Like echo of a fading voice,
Asking where I've been.

"But don't mind"........,
Its the tides of waging storm,
Sweeping across my path,
To keep holding on to my values,
A peace of heart,I found at last.

Where have you been?
It thundered from your heart,
I heard...in that lofty smile,
That spilt like a boiling pot.

My"Haman"is gone,
So its my "Purim"
While I laughhhh....


Scheme XXXXA XXXXX AXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 010111 1111001 11010101 10111 111 1011101 100111 111011110 0111111 1111 110111 111101 1110101 11 11110 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 452
Words 103
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 3
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

A poem of two hidden heart engaging in guessing the consent of the other. The other seem to bargain it's attraction that is drawn from beauty of fading voice.

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Written on March 03, 2024

Submitted by Bossmanas on March 03, 2024

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Dumka Vincent

I am a lover of poem.I love to read and write and my first letter was addressed to my headmaster,requested that he assist my mother to pay off my school exammination fee.At the age 6 years,I had already started writing my short story books.But though,some life experiences had also contributed towards my continuous effort to face the challenges of life.I had written series of prose,articles andwith my little experienced poetry is part of my whole life,when I sing in poetry,speak in poetry,settle scores in poetry,discuss in poetry etc.My dedication towards poetry out of my utmost concern is to be Known for my credibility,participatory efforts in my personal achievement and divine from God.Poetry is part of my life.May poetry.com live on (Dumka Richard Vincent.L more…

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