Analysis of My hidden mute emotions



Upon the serene blue sea that stretches afar,
My eyes behold only me when gazing from afar.
Loneliness descends to the depths below,
My eyes in the water silently watch me go.

Resisting shielding anyone from my plight,
My eyes flee from the heart as if in flight.
From the sea, eyes glance upon my frame,
Silently shedding tears into the ocean's claim.

Waves crash upon the shore from the sea,
Erasing footprints etched in the sandy plea.
Wounds in my soul remain untouched, stand,
The sea can wash away only my solitude's sand.

Oh, my concealed mute emotions in me,
Life condemning me, making me decree.
Oh, my withered, yearning desires untamed,
I depart, surrendering you to the sea unnamed!

Ah, my hidden mute emotions within,
Ah, my withered, yearning desires thin.

The sea's soothing sounds calm the soul,
Creating hope for the days yet to unroll.
Bestowing fleeting joy upon humankind,
Every dark night heralds a dawn we'll find!


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF EECX GG XBHH
Poetic Form
Metre 010011111001 1101101110101 1000110101 110010100111 0101010111 1111011101 101110111 100101010101 110101101 0101100101 101101011 01110110111 1101101001 1010110101 1110100101 1010100110101 1110101001 1110100101 01101101 0101101111 0101010110 10011100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 941
Words 187
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 27

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This poetic composition beautifully explores the emotions intertwined with the sea.

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Submitted by Ayten_Sh on January 30, 2024

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My hidden mute emotions

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