Analysis of Flatlined
Flora Poole 1982 (Hagerstown, md)
I got him
Y'all's relationship flat line
I got him, and he wants what I have to offer and have
I got him he loves the way we have hot passionate love sessions
I got him he no longer wants you calling nor texting him
I got him
And he very satisfied
Each and Every time
Hollering and screaming and moaning out my name
I'm the one too blame
For how he is so obsessively
Loves being driven insane
By our bodies against
Sided, by side, on top of one another
I got him
And he sings how happy we're together
He no longer wants the past ex's or anyone else
I got him, and I'm the only one he wants to pleasure
Sorry though y'all relationship went completely flat lined now he doesn't want either of y'all back anytime
He definitely won't ever change his mind
There is no comparison when it involves you with me
Oh, can't you see y'all's relationship failed and flat lined
Y'all could not ever compare too me
I got him all the time and he very pleased with
How I aim too please
I got him
N he wants to get on his knees
Because I'm the only woman he can see that
Satisfies him just more than he has ever been pleased
I got him
Y'all's relationship flat line
I got him, and he wants what I have to offer and have
I got him he loves the way we have hot passionate love sessions
I got him he no longer wants you calling nor texting him
I got him
And he very satisfied
Each and Every time
Hollering and screaming and moaning out my name
I'm the one too blame
For how he is so obsessively
Loves being driven insane
By our bodies against
Sided, by side, on top of one another
I got him
And he loves that I love to aim and please
I got him, he's wanting to get on his knees
So y'all know he no longer interested
And y'all's relationship ain't no longer it completely flat lined
He finally got the one he wants, needs
That makes him whole and more complete
Written by :flora Poole aka, violet Poole
Scheme | A B C D A A E F G G H I J K A k x k f l h l h x m A m x x A B C D A A E F G G H I J K A m m x l x x x |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 101011 11101111111001 1111101111100110 11111101110111 111 011010 101001 100010010111 10111 111110100 1101001 1101001 10111111010 111 0111101010 111010111101 11101010111110 10101010101111101101110 11000110111 11101001101111 111110101011 11100111 111101011011 11111 111 11111111 011010101111 101111111011 111 101011 11101111111001 1111101111100110 11111101110111 111 011010 101001 100010010111 10111 111110100 1101001 1101001 10111111010 111 0111111101 11111011111 111110100 010101110101011 1100101111 11110101 101101101001 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,973 |
Words | 435 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 51 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 51 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 29 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 7 |
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