Analysis of The Thing That's Missing



Our garbage man's truck died.
I'm sad with all my heart
And the driver he tried,
But it just wouldn't start.

The owner who I know
Lives on the other street.
I watched the driver go
Up my road on two feet.

I do not have a car,
Fixing cars not a clue.
Thank God, it isn't far,
Where he has to walk to.

So how will they need me,
Now since there's help out there.
I will look out to see,
If it starts with each prayer.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Quatrain 
Metre 1010111 111111 001011 111101 010111 110101 110101 111111 111101 101101 111101 111111 111111 111111 111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 417
Words 103
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Garbage man's truck driver

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Written on March 16, 2024

Submitted by robertm.06281 on March 16, 2024

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Robert Joseph Mattingly

A Poet for forty years since 1983, a Substitute Teacher, B.S.Ed.. I built a building of poems beyond imagination, 64 inches tall. more…

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