Analysis of Man made of zest.



A man in a zest,
All he known-
is a terrific trail of poverty,
Remain from,
half-million mothers of his.

Pair dimes spurt gross over his lackluster sheet.
Slush beating the man,
nay timid by the hush of zeal,
nay fearful of father's bare hands.

Trunk in a state of unruliness,
malicious belief to relief,
a risk the human clam.
A sinister - He called,
Drank aside kind feast.

Mother's eyes mind agony
as long as he was born,
A damp trail bursts on his kisser,
Knees tower over,
Body falsifying man to death,
In spite be sensed
a mild embrace.
An eyesight of source
first and foremost grin.


Scheme XXAXB XXXX BXXXX AXCCXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01001 111 1001011100 011 1101011 1111101101 11001 11010111 11011011 100111 01001101 010101 010011 10111 1011100 111111 01111110 11010 10100111 0111 0101 1111 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 595
Words 133
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 9
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

I wrote this poem as I was fascinated by the idea of bodies full of alcohol not feeling the real cold. I wanted to depict why the person got bashed, in this case, his childhood. I thought that the idea of one's body lying to them to death was a great touch to the topic.

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Written on March 11, 2024

Submitted by evuliskiri on March 11, 2024

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Amelia Ring.

I don't understand how I get the hold of my words, wish I could know. I'm quite young so I have much more to learn both in my life and in terms. Today perhaps I'm nothing, but a person who likes reading and writing terms. more…

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