Analysis of WHEN AM GONE



WHEN AM GONE

When am lost
Into the thick soil
Gone to rest
What's left for me?

When am gone to
Serve the pasts
Laid down to peace
What runs my name?

When am no more
Eating is forbidden
Walking is impossible
Writing is my enemy
Who rep me?

When am gone
My deeds rise to help
Serve as rep
It sings and rings my name

My works is left
After am lost
It wore my face

When am gone
My deeds are left
My earth works are there


Scheme A bxxc xxxd xxxcc Axxd ebx Aex
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 01011 111 1111 1111 101 1111 1111 1111 101100 1010100 1011100 111 111 11111 111 110111 1111 1011 1111 111 1111 11111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 423
Words 99
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 5, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 46
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Written on November 10, 2023

Submitted by sulaimon_k on March 24, 2024

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