Analysis of Last orders at the bar



Last orders at the bar

Look at me
I'm like
A ship wreck
Lying on the sea bed
Decaying
Covered in coral and rust
Too tired
Too weary
To
navigate my way back
to
the surface
Tired
of trying to avoid the bends
And
the turbulent flow
Just
to get to dry land
And
They're calling last
Orders
at the bar
But
I'm drowning
Oceanus
Has decided it's
Time


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101 111 11 011 101011 010 1001001 110 110 1 10111 1 010 10 11010101 0 01001 1 11111 0 1101 10 101 1 110 1 1101 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 347
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 27
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 10
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

It’s a realisation that you have to change

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Written on February 22, 2024

Submitted by pauljoe77 on February 27, 2024

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