Analysis of Destiny



Wish I had a special place

A place where I would be

Safe absolutely as safe As I could be

A place that's warm and comfortable

Embraced by strong loving arms

A place to laugh and cry in peace

A place without fear of harm

A place to build a legacy

A place without games or shame.

A place to let my guard down and rest

A place where love could grow

Be expressed and felt

A place where the world could

Know who I really am

A special place to share my life

My love with one loving man

A special place called home

The end of living alone This place really sounds good

If this place just existed

I would stop twisting Turning in bed at night

Rest my head on his chest

Hold him oh so tight

Never let these moments go Cherish each day more and

Trust and know that every time

He left, walked out the door My special place he'd miss And he'd return faithfully For my special kiss

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Scheme X A A X X X X A X B X X C X X X X C X D B D X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 011111 1010111111 011101000 0111101 01110101 0101111 01110100 0101111 011111101 011111 10101 011011 111101 01011111 1111101 010111 0111001111011 1111010 11110100111 111111 11111 1011101101110 10111001 111101110111010110011101 1010101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 961
Words 215
Sentences 2
Stanzas 26
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 28
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

Written in 2000.

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Written on October 01, 2000

Submitted by j128w2 on March 20, 2024

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