Analysis of Right or Left



When during the long passage
across the sea of life
do we bear right or do we bear left?
How do we know for sure
what is the best way to go?

Each one of us and no one person spared,
has an inimitable part to play for Shakespeare himself.
Puppet masters and puppets,
triumph and tragedy
playing two sides of the same coin.
Will madness take over the authentic self,
or just when we can feel the prescient illumination
of hope
we tumble down into an obscure rabbit hole
only to find ourselves at the very beginning.

We are here to live with heart,
with greatness,
to fulfill our deepest promises to ourselves
to love, to challenge, to hope
to celebrate and love even harder
the parts that are the hardest to love.
We are here to give and forgive,
to start and finish, to evolve,
to become our truest, our fullest self,
to embrace all that is so alive
and wonderful
and tragic
and incongruous
in this starry universe
we call home.

Let us sing and dance together
on this great Shakespearean stage,
play the parts and move together
through the twisted scripts and plots
that invite us to define who we are
the masters of our own fate
the cosmic heroes
and the beneficiaries of love and loss.
Together we reach past the heartache,
cry together
clutch hands tightly
and hold each other up.
Together, we carry the light of humanity forward
never knowing for sure
whether to bear right or to bear left.


Scheme XXABX XCXDXCXEXX XFXEGXXXCXXXFXX GXGXXXXXXGDXXBA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 1100110 010111 111111111 111111 1101111 1111011101 11010001111101 1010010 100100 10111011 11011000101 11111101000010 11 110101101101 10110011010010 1111111 110 10110101001001 1111011 110011010 011101011 11111001 11010101 101101010101 101111101 0100 010 00100 011010 111 11101010 1111001 10101010 1010101 1011101111 01011011 01010 0001001101 01011101 1010 1110 011101 010110011010010 101011 101111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,397
Words 280
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 10, 15, 15
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 278
Words per stanza (avg) 64

About this poem

This poem was written in remembrance of Ronald (Bo) Chester LLoyd who passed away unexpectedly and tragically before his time at age 66, on March 9, 2024.

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Written on March 16, 2024

Submitted by spiritu700 on March 27, 2024

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Robbin T. Hartridge

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