Analysis of Danielle
Daniele........ in you I see entwined
Hidden murkiness within the light
And shadows in the darkness of night
Life and death - in one combined
Within you lays deep vast emptiness
Tears and screams silently disguising
A tender soft smile is covering
Sorrow, anguish, & desparation veiling
But the warmth of sunlight is teasing
In golden rays upon you shining
Covering you, so gently seducing
Your pretty face from me concealing
Can the bitter night bring jubilation?
A soft touch a gentle whisper closing
From the distance ur name calling
With a special fondness touching
My heart within me is pounding
Your struggling for air grasping
In despair.... but the ecstasy uniting
Tormenting fright and pain igniting
Hell fire !!! and bliss now ascending
In me the storm of passion is rising
Frenzy, wrath, excitement & yearning
Your aching wounds my lips seducing
Your tender eyes into me collapsing
My gaze, a cold winter breeze caressing
From within... your soul fully shattering
A feeling so pure and raw so thrilling
Trembling waves of pain & pleasure
In delight, joy, through my body rushing
My restless soul crushing yet tantalizing
Do you feel me moving in elation?
That glorious sight of you succumbing
A cold sharp blade your skin mutilating
But a lovely frangrance camouflaging
Your silent torment in the night echoing
The lovely magic is now slowly fading
As the midnight hour is in passing
But you are still here softly breathing
And my lips yours covering suffocating
Life and death in you now separating
Both worlds my clenched arms rupturing
Light and darkness in me I am sheltering
I will be back tonight - loving you eternally
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,636 |
Words | 279 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 44 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,326 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 278 |
About this poem
It is about a real account of a girl who was raped and murdered. The poem is written by the peroetrator himself who is not a poet and his first language is not english.
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