Analysis of Im sorry you see

Ailsa wright 1987 (Dumfries)



To my 3 beautiful boys
I'm sorry, you see
Mum's not quite been the same lately
But I promise I'm getting better
I owe it to both you and me

To my family and friends
I'm sorry, you see
If I've ignored calls and texts
I know it's only because you care for me
But some days it's been a struggle just to function and think lately

To anyone who relates to this
 I'm sorry, you see
But I hope you understand even the strongest struggle sometimes
Be it anyone,  even you or me


Scheme xAaxa xAxaa xAxa
Poetic Form
Metre 111001 11011 11110110 111011010 11111101 1110001 11011 1101101 11110011111 1111101011100110 11010111 11011 111101100101001 111010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 478
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

Dedicated to my children, after a recent struggle with mental health i just wanted them to know i was sorry, wished things were different but determined to make things better.

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Submitted by ailsa.15313 on April 30, 2024

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Ailsa wright

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