Analysis of The Swimmer

John Crowe Ransom 1888 (Pulaski) – 1974 (Gambier)



IN dog-days plowmen quit their toil,
And frog-ponds in the meadow boil,
And grasses on the upland broil,
And all the coiling things uncoil,
And eggs and meats and Christians spoil.

A mile away the valley breaks
(So all good valleys do) and makes
A cool green water for hot heads' sakes,
And sundry sullen dog-days' aches.

The swimmer's body is white and clean,
It is washed by a water of deepest green
The color of leaves in a starlight scene,
And it is as white as the stars between.

But the swimmer's soul is a thing possessed,
His soul is naked as his breast,
Remembers not its east and west,
And ponders this way, I have guessed:

I have no home in the cruel heat
On alien soil that blisters feet.
This water is my native seat,
And more than ever cool and sweet,
So long by forfeiture escheat.

O my forgiving element!
I gash you to my heart's content
And never need be penitent,
So light you float me when breath is spent
And close again where my rude way went.

And now you close above my head,
And I lie low in a soft green bed
That dog-days never have visited.
'By the sweat of thy face shalt thou eat bread:'
The garden's curse is at last unsaid

What do I need of senses five?
Why eat, or drink, or sweat, or wive?
What do we strive for when we strive?
What do we live for when alive?

And what if I do not rise again,
Never to goad a heated brain
To hotter excesses of joy and pain?

Why should it be against the grain
To lie so cold and still and sane?

Water-bugs play shimmer-shimmer,
Naked body's just a glimmer,
Watch ticks every second grimmer:
Come to the top, O wicked swimmer!


Scheme AAAAA BBBB CCCC DDDD EEEED XFXFF GGXGG HHHH XII II JJJJ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0111111 0110011 01010101 010111 01010101 01010101 11110101 011101111 01010111 01101101 11110101101 010110011 0111110101 101110101 11110111 01011101 01011111 111100101 110011101 11011101 01110101 1111001 11010100 11111110 01011100 111111111 010111111 01110111 011100111 111101100 1011111111 010111101 11111101 11111111 11111111 11111101 011111101 10110101 110101101 11110101 11110101 10111010 10101010 111001010 110111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,563
Words 310
Sentences 16
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 5, 5, 5, 4, 3, 2, 4
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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John Crowe Ransom

John Crowe Ransom was an educator, scholar, literary critic, poet, essayist and editor. more…

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