Analysis of Stars

Joyce Kilmer 1886 (New Brunswick) – 1918 (Seringes-et-Nesles)



(For the Rev. James J. Daly, S. J.)

Bright stars, yellow stars, flashing through the air,
Are you errant strands of Lady Mary's hair?
As she slits the cloudy veil and bends down through,
Do you fall across her cheeks and over heaven too?

Gay stars, little stars, you are little eyes,
Eyes of baby angels playing in the skies.
Now and then a winged child turns his merry face
Down toward the spinning world -- what a funny place!

Jesus Christ came from the Cross (Christ receive my soul!)
In each perfect hand and foot there was a bloody hole.
Four great iron spikes there were, red and never dry,
Michael plucked them from the Cross and set them in the sky.

Christ's Troop, Mary's Guard, God's own men,
Draw your swords and strike at Hell and strike again.
Every steel-born spark that flies where God's battles are,
Flashes past the face of God, and is a star.


Scheme X AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH
Poetic Form
Metre 101111011 1110110101 11101110101 11101010111 1110101010101 1110111101 11101010001 10101111101 101010110101 101110110111 0101101110101 111011010101 1011101011001 11101111 11101110101 1001111111101 10101110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 856
Words 163
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 32
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 07, 2023

50 sec read
62

Joyce Kilmer

Joyce Kilmer was an American writer and poet mainly remembered for a short poem titled "Trees", which was published in the collection Trees and Other Poems in 1914. more…

All Joyce Kilmer poems | Joyce Kilmer Books

3 fans

Discuss this Joyce Kilmer poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Stars" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 2 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/24655/stars>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Joyce Kilmer

    »

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    28
    days
    0
    hours
    30
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    "If ever two were one, then surely we."
    A Sylvia Plath
    B Hilda Doolittle
    C Anne Bradstreet
    D Anne Sexton