Analysis of Betrothed

Louise Bogan 1897 (Livermore Falls) – 1970 (New York City)



You have put your two hands upon me, and your mouth,
You have said my name as a prayer.
Here where trees are planted by the water
I have watched your eyes, cleansed from regret,
And your lips, closed over all that love cannot say,

My mother remembers the agony of her womb
And long years that seemed to promise more than this.
She says, "You do not love me,
You do not want me,
You will go away."

In the country whereto I go
        I shall not see the face of my friend
        Nor her hair the color of sunburnt grasses;
        Together we shall not find
        The land on whose hills bends the new moon
        In air traversed of birds.

What have I thought of love?
I have said, "It is beauty and sorrow."
I have thought that it would bring me lost delights, and splendor
As a wind out of old time . . .

But there is only the evening here,
And the sound of willows
Now and again dipping their long oval leaves in the water.


Scheme XXAXB XXCCB DXXXXX XDAX XXA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111011011 11111101 1111101010 111111101 011110111101 1100100100101 01111110111 1111111 11111 11101 0010111 111101111 1010101110 0101111 011111011 011011 111111 1111110010 11111111101010 1011111 111100101 00111 100110111010010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 924
Words 181
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 4, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Louise Bogan

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