Analysis of Under the Waterfall

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



'Whenever I plunge my arm, like this,
In a basin of water, I never miss
The sweet sharp sense of a fugitive day
Fetched back from its thickening shroud of gray.
Hence the only prime
And real love-rhyme
That I know by heart,
And that leaves no smart,
Is the purl of a little valley fall
About three spans wide and two spans tall
Over a table of solid rock,
And into a scoop of the self-same block;
The purl of a runlet that never ceases
In stir of kingdoms, in wars, in peaces;
With a hollow boiling voice it speaks
And has spoken since hills were turfless peaks.'

'And why gives this the only prime
Idea to you of a real love-rhyme?
And why does plunging your arm in a bowl
Full of spring water, bring throbs to your soul?'

'Well, under the fall, in a crease of the stone,
Though precisely where none ever has known,
Jammed darkly, nothing to show how prized,
And by now with its smoothness opalized,
Is a grinking glass:
For, down that pass
My lover and I
Walked under a sky
Of blue with a leaf-wove awning of green,
In the burn of August, to paint the scene,
And we placed our basket of fruit and wine
By the runlet's rim, where we sat to dine;
And when we had drunk from the glass together,
Arched by the oak-copse from the weather,
I held the vessel to rinse in the fall,
Where it slipped, and it sank, and was past recall,
Though we stooped and plumbed the little abyss
With long bared arms. There the glass still is.
And, as said, if I thrust my arm below
Cold water in a basin or bowl, a throe
From the past awakens a sense of that time,
And the glass we used, and the cascade's rhyme.
The basin seems the pool, and its edge
The hard smooth face of the brook-side ledge,
And the leafy pattern of china-ware
The hanging plants that were bathing there.

'By night, by day, when it shines or lours,
There lies intact that chalice of ours,
And its presence adds to the rhyme of love
Persistently sung by the fall above.
No lip has touched it since his and mine
In turns therefrom sipped lovers' wine.'


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Poetic Form
Metre 010111111 00101101101 0111101001 1111100111 10101 0111 11111 01111 1011010101 011110111 100101101 0010110111 0110111010 011100101 101010111 011011011 01110101 0101110111 0111011001 1111011111 11001001101 1010111011 110101111 01111101 1011 1111 11001 11001 1110111011 0011101101 01110101101 101111111 01111101010 110111010 1101011001 1110110111 1110101001 111110111 0111111101 11000101101 10101001111 0011100011 010101011 011110111 0010101101 010110101 111111111 1101110110 0110110111 0100110101 111111101 0111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,008
Words 391
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 16, 4, 26, 6
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 387
Words per stanza (avg) 97
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 28, 2023

1:57 min read
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Thomas Hardy

Thomas Hardy, was not a Scottish Minister, not a Moderator of the General Assembly of the Church of Scotland nor a Professor of Eccesiastical History at Edinburgh University. more…

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