Analysis of The Lord Is Better Than Salve



My heart began to churn,
as I turned to and fro.
Deep within me it began to burn,
as I basked in the sunlight's glow.
Inside me a hunger yearned-
for something I couldn't have.
As my skin turned red and burned,
I turned to the Lord, He's better than salve.


Scheme ABABCDCE
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 111101 101110111 1110011 0110101 1101101 1111101 1110111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 249
Words 51
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 194
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Submitted on December 15, 2015

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Mary Bone

Mary Bone's poems have appeared in over a hundred publications and online sources. She has also had two books of poetry and several short stories published. more…

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