Analysis of My 21st Birthday



You set off the fire alarm,

pulling me from my novel,

to the grass outside.

From a boy into a bird,

you surfed towards me,

and I was wrapped up in you,

your giddy gift,

though it was my turn to receive.

Your bullish greed,

wouldn’t let my eyes,

or my heart wander.

Still, I couldn’t complain,

I was spoiled by the strands of silver,

spray painted gold,

lazily lying over lapis lazuli.

I had the world on a string,

and rain in my shoes,

as I chanted your best wishes,

until my throat begged for mercy.

I ran across town,

and painted the world,

with the sound of your voice,

and a cry of,

“Happy Birthday Jennifer.”


Scheme X X X X A X X X X X B X B X A X X X A X X X X B
Poetic Form
Metre 11101001 1011110 10111 1010101 11011 0111101 1101 11111101 1101 1111 11110 11101 111101110 1101 100101010010 1101101 01011 11101110 01111110 11011 01001 101111 0011 101100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 619
Words 122
Sentences 7
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted on March 14, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jennifer Juan

Jennifer Juan is a British poet and musical artist, whose works include "Home Wrecker", "Last Of The Greenwich Glamour Girls" and "Stormy Weather". more…

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