Analysis of Touching Down



So much for
the lone cannon

up to its ears
in winter wheat

in the Kansas
of someone's dying

backyard. So much
for the choke

cherries sprouting
out its mouth.

Here, the dead
stay dead,

What's left is
still covered

in marrow reds.
Bags for the bags

of bodies. Shovels
more familiar

with grief
than gardens.

So much for
the anthem

loosening
in the throats

of porch cats,
yellow eyes

floating like
fireflies, sliced

moons over fields
siphoning bones

from the earth
as if there were

a milk in this world
sweet enough to last.


Scheme Ax xx xb xx bx cc xx xx xd xx Ax bx xx xx xx xd xx
Poetic Form
Metre 111 0110 1111 0101 0010 1110 111 101 1010 111 101 11 111 110 0101 1101 11010 1010 11 110 111 010 100 001 111 101 101 101 1101 1001 101 1110 01011 10111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 487
Words 95
Sentences 6
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on October 09, 2018

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Philip Schaefer

Philip Schaefer is the author of three chapbooks, two cowritten with friend and poet Jeff Whitney. He won the Meridian Editor’s Prize in poetry in 2016. He received his MFA from the University of Montana in Missoula. (Author photo by Natalie Schaefer) more…

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