Analysis of Loving You More Immortally
He looked salaciously at your eyes; pondering on umpteenth ways to extricate the last iota of moisture,
While I glimpsed at them; to get wholesomely absorbed in the golden stream of profuse empathy that cascaded down your cheek.
He looked at your flesh; fervently desiring to be torturously tempted into a
whirlpool of unending seduction,
While I glimpsed it; insatiably wanting to become an irrevocably integral constituent of your blood.
He kept you in his dwelling; to tantalize himself beyond the realms of unprecedented desire; manifesting his heinous intents into an optimum reality,
While I incarcerated you perpetually within the corridors of my moist breath; making sure that you frolicked till eternity in the land of resplendent stars.
He sketched you to assimilate all the millions that lay buried on this fathomless continent; utilizing your divinely smile to unsurpassable advantage,
While I drowned myself perennially in your sacrosanct shadow; becoming entirely oblivious to the contours of my own body in the swirl of your mystical enchantment.
He fed you with meals all throughout the day; so that you pacified the most infinitesimal of his demand; executed his midnight chores; to save him from the
tyranny of the sinister night,
While I encapsulated your majestic countenance like an invincible fortress from all sides; ensuring that you nestled in celestial bliss for countless more births to unveil.
He forced you to tickle him torrentially as every minute unfurled; bouncing in untamed euphoria as you haplessly squirmed towards the ground,
While I always made it intransigently sure to adhere to the most extreme silhouettes of your lips; be the sole reason of your every compassionate smile.
He invidiously used you as an ingenious key to unveil the most formidable of lock; twisting you till the times your soul had no tears to cry,
While I was the passionate set of lines which evolved freshly on your palms; each time you clenched your impeccable fists to rise above the meadow of macabre
blackness.
He manipulated your life like a frigid matchstick; lighting and extinguishing it hideously to enlighten his times of disdainful remorse,
While I pledged to the Creator to give me an infinite deaths; to make each life of yours a marvelously glorious paradise.
And he was one of those devils who loved you only for your flurry of grandiloquent riches; wanting to transiently taste the beauty the lord had endowed you with,
While I was there present every instant in your heart; loving you more immortally than any entity in heaven or earth; with each of your unleashing beats.
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Metre | 11111110011111001010110 1111111101001011011001010111 11111100010011110010 11010010 11111101011010001000100111 1110110110010101101000101001100101110010 11010010100001010011111011111010000110101 1111010101011101111001001010111010 111101000011001010010001001011111000111100010 1111110101111100100100110110011111110 100101001 11010010101001101001011101011100010111011101 11111011110010011001010011110101 11111111011010101111101101110001001 1111110101101011000111011011111111 11101001111011011111111010011101011010 10 101001110101100010011000101011101001 11110010111110011111110100010010 011111101111011101010010101110100110111 11111010010011101111101000101111110101 |
Characters | 2,592 |
Words | 427 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 3, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 102 |
Words per line (avg) | 20 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 237 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 47 |
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