Analysis of Transform Me Into A Child
When I was with them; I felt as if all my tensions had waded forever into thin wisps of oblivion; profoundly enthused by their smiles,
When I was with them; I felt the most strongest entity alive; ready to plunge on into the valley of brazing adventure; with both my eyes tightly closed,
When I was with them; I felt all my unfinished longings come to a celestial rest; cuddling their marvelously innocent chin,
When I was with them; I felt as if all crime on earth had ceased; profusely blending with the Omnipotent light in their eyes,
When I was with them; I felt that there were angels wandering on every quarter of the planet; fervently captivated by the captivating enigma in their persona,
When I was with them; I felt enveloped by boundlessly enthralling colors of harmony; incredulously spell bound by the immaculate melody that drifted spontaneously from their mouths,
When I was with them; I felt as if I had washed all my sins of past life; ecstatically hoisting their eternal visages upon my shoulders,
When I was with them; I felt adorned in an ocean of mesmerizing silk; watching them rhapsodically roll and frolic in the shimmering sands,
When I was with them; I felt floating in a land of surreal enchantment; as they astoundingly rejoiced in an entrenchment of their own; far away from the world
of manipulative lechery and sin,
When I was with them; I felt reborn every unfurling minute; as they blossomed into relentlessly tireless energy; exuberantly cascading into a stream of perpetual happiness,
When I was with them; I felt as if God was with me on every step I tread; insatiably lost in their rampantly innocent freedom; diffusing into a cloud of unparalleled entertainment,
When I was with them; I felt inundated with unprecedented joy; transiting back into realms of fantastically charming childhood; as they stirred the inner most chords of my heart; with the majestic harmony in their voice,
When I was with them; I felt discovering an incomprehensible battalion of excitement every instant; witnessing the everlasting newness in their souls,
When I was with them; I felt as if I belonged to the most complete family on this planet; no longer feeling that I was an impoverished again,
When I was with them; I felt all my disastrously frazzled senses replenish with the ultimate gifts of life; as they immortalized the spirit of existence with the enchantment of their hearts,
When I was with them; I felt as secure as I used too in my perished mothers lap; as they uninhibitedly embraced me; without their blood being exactly the same as mine,
When I was with them; I felt the gorgeous skies shower upon countless blessings upon mankind; as they disseminated the perennial message of Omnipresent love
and peace to the most obsolete corner of this Universe,
When I was them; I felt the most irrefutably richest man alive without a penny in my ragamuffin pockets; as I held their spotlessly truthful bodies close to mine,
For these children were the best thing that could have happened to the core of vindictively fighting earth; as I ardently prayed to Almighty Lord; to once again
transform me into a child.
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Metre | 111111111111011001001111010001001111 11111110110100011011101010110101111101 11111111101010110010110110001001 111111111111111010101001001011 11111111101010011001010101001001010001001010 111111101011110110011110010010011001000111 1111111111111111110100101010101110 11111110101101100110111010001001 1111111100011010101101000101010111101101 10100101 1111111111000101011100101001001001010010110100100 11111111111111100111110111001001001011010010 11111111001010011001011101001011110101111110010100011 11111110100100100010101010010100001010011 11111111110110101100111011010111101001 1111111110100101001010100111110100010101010010111 1111111101111101101011110110111100100111 11111110101100110100111110100001001010101 0110110101110 111111011101010101001110111111010111 111000111111010111101111001101011101 0110101 |
Characters | 3,136 |
Words | 541 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 19 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 2 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 115 |
Words per line (avg) | 25 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 133 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
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