Analysis of Your Immortal slave
When my love was on your hair; it lingered in overwhelming fascination; of your majestic exuberance drifting royally with the compassionate winds,
When my love was on your forehead; it bonded with threads of your sacred imagery; the mesmerizing fantasies that revolved in your mind,
When my love was on your eyebrows; it moved subtly like a crown princess; everytime you raised them toquell; the innocent quandaries of your life,
When my love was on your eyelashes; it frolicked like a new born child; relinquishing all apprehensions of the uncouthly manipulative society,
When my love was on your eyes; it eyes; it witnessed the extraneous earth outside; as the most unsurpassably divine mission of existence,
When my love was on your nose; it coined new definitions of an optimistic tomorrow; feeling stronger than any entity alive; in the swirl of your impregnable breath,
When my love was on your cheeks; it mischievously philandered in the mountains of desire; profusely astounded by your seductive flurry of crimson blushes,
When my love was on your lips; it learnt the ultimate kiss of its life; exploring the rhapsodic periphery and the fabulous pink; to the most insatiable of its heart's content,
When my love was on your teeth; it felt more secure than the impregnable fortress; as you clenched them into your immaculate smile,
When my love was on your throat; it romanced in the tunes of stupendously melodious enchantment; wholesomely lost in the cadence of unfathomably unending ecstasy,
When my love was on your Adams apple; it rejoiced in boundless moments of ebullient survival; felt like a freshly born infant; bouncing incessantly in the lap of its mother,
When my love was on your shoulders; it admired your indefatigably perseverance to be the absolute best; uninhibitedly lending your shoulders to the service of all humanity,
When my love was on your hands; it intricately traced the enigmatic lines of destiny on your impeccable palms; bonding with their philanthropic spirit for centuries unprecedented,
When my love was on your soul; it felt the closest to God on this Universe; drowning in a world of benign beauty and mankind,
When my love was on your chest; it coalesced perpetually with your passionately thundering heart; utterly spell bound by the irrefutably righteous voice of your conscience,
When my love was on your belly; it titillated itself beyond the boundaries of untamed control; as you swished your ravenous visage; to ignite fireballs of yearning in the morbidly dwindling night,
When my love was on your legs; it relentlessly marched towards the kingdom of goodness; pulverizing all diabolical demons which came its way,
When my love was on your reflection; it perennially felt the richest possession alive; embracing all on this Universe; as a united breeze of blissful existence,
And when my love was on your feet; it became your immortal slave; not only for this birth; but for infinite more life's and death you were destined to breathe; you
were definite to come.
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Metre | 11111111100010010110100100101001001001 111111101101111101000100100101011 111111111100101101011110100100111 1111111011101110100101010101000100 11111111111000100111101101101010 111111111101011010011010110100010011101001 111111111100101010010010110101011010 1111111110100111101000100100001001101010011110 11111111110110010010111101101001 11111111100111010001011001011010100 1111111010101010101010010110101101001000011110 111111101010110101101011101101010110100 1111111110001001011100110100110110101011000100 1111111110101111101000110110011 1111111101010001110001001100111011011110 11111110110001010100110111111001010110110001001001 111111110100101010110110100101111 11111101010100010100100101011110100101110010 01111111101101011101111110011011010111 010011 |
Characters | 3,020 |
Words | 497 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 19 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 123 |
Words per line (avg) | 25 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 129 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
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