Analysis of The Promise of Spring - A Fibonacci



I
Will
Kiss you
While you sleep
Lady dressed in white
And melt your cold heart  made of ice

Then
You
Will rise
Liquefied
High into the sky
And fall as raindrops from God’s eyes

To
The
Waiting
Buds below
Where now you will grow
With me - in the bloom of a rose

~~~
Author:  Elaine George

* Note:  This poem is a Personification as well as a triple Fibonacci


Scheme AXBXXX XBCXAC BXXDDX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1 11 111 10101 01111111 1 1 11 10 10101 0111111 1 0 10 101 11111 11001101 1 10011 11101000010111010010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 351
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on June 14, 2020

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Elaine C. George

Not to be confused with other poets by the name of Elaine George, I am Elaine Cecelia George, born on the 27th day of November in the year 1946 in the city of Saint John, New Brunswick, Canada.   (Violin, Snowflake, A Winter Rose, From my Porch, The Love of a Gentleman, Where the Heart Resides, One Regret, The Tide of Time, and the Promise of Spring), have been published in various books and magazines and school books.  Some are being used as teaching tools for poetry classes offered on websites, most without my permission, nonetheless, I am honoured. One  poetry website has given credit to another Elaine George from England for my personification poem, 'SNOWFLAKE.  I have asked them several times to correct this, but it still remains unchanged. Since 2006, in addition to my books of poetry, I have had several short stories and A book entitled, 'Earthbound Angels made of Stone, A epic story written by me in a collaboration with The Canadian Photographer, Darren Creighton. I am currently writing a historical fiction thriller entitled, Out of the Darkness. I hope to have it completed before the year end. more…

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